“You deserve each other” is the perfectly venomous response.
Knew I liked Zoe… (and the Greek Zoh-ee - I have an English, Russian, and French keyboard, but no Greek one so I’m just transliterating the pronunciation).
I did not expect Chronos hanging out in Zoë’s mind (did I get the right letter, there?) to result in their romantic pairing! I mean, I love that, but I think I needed a little more from Zoë. Also, feel very much vindicated that she did have a plan.
I needed a competent heroine and in the end she same in clutch. She showed that despite her crippling condition she still had the capacity to ponder and persuade Ever to create the circumstances to give her a chance.
By a little more (sorry, the hazards of reading and commenting while still waking up), is that I got her gratitude for Chronos being around but no other emotional clue (admittedly, she had a lot going on). Also also, they fulfilled the prophecy. He chose her, she chose him. Sweet.
Haha appreciate you commenting as you're waking up! Call it a neurotic writer trying to keep a plot twist under wraps but also trying to stick by a self-imposed word limit. The word counts are starting to swell as we get to the end, but this chapter needed the 1,500+ words to get the story across.
“You deserve each other” is the perfectly venomous response.
Knew I liked Zoe… (and the Greek Zoh-ee - I have an English, Russian, and French keyboard, but no Greek one so I’m just transliterating the pronunciation).
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Correct, this whole story is just one, big play-on-words
And Zoë having that response is very befitting of a goddess.
I did not expect Chronos hanging out in Zoë’s mind (did I get the right letter, there?) to result in their romantic pairing! I mean, I love that, but I think I needed a little more from Zoë. Also, feel very much vindicated that she did have a plan.
I needed a competent heroine and in the end she same in clutch. She showed that despite her crippling condition she still had the capacity to ponder and persuade Ever to create the circumstances to give her a chance.
By a little more (sorry, the hazards of reading and commenting while still waking up), is that I got her gratitude for Chronos being around but no other emotional clue (admittedly, she had a lot going on). Also also, they fulfilled the prophecy. He chose her, she chose him. Sweet.
Haha appreciate you commenting as you're waking up! Call it a neurotic writer trying to keep a plot twist under wraps but also trying to stick by a self-imposed word limit. The word counts are starting to swell as we get to the end, but this chapter needed the 1,500+ words to get the story across.
I don't know what to think...
Well tell me what you’re thinking and feeling anyway 😊
Well, I'm happy that the baby is OK, for starters!
Poor Ever keeps being just tossed around by the circumstances!
And now he and Taylor can be reapers together!
Yeah Ever not having control over his story has always been in the back of my mind. I do feel sorry for him. Still, I promised a happy ending so…
Zoe as goddess Ever seemingly lost . What's next
Awesome!